somewhere between Bermuda triangles tangles comets and satellite celluloid there exists a black hole and some person who is a near likeness to you sits on a shore where time moves in different increments
No one is ever late
or early
or even ‘punctual’
They need no elections no protections, no laws no cause
they never EVER say things like ‘tomorrow’ or
‘maybe’ or ‘someday’
They just are.
Being
Here
Now.
This post is in response to the Daily Prompt Maybe
Excellent, I like lines that start in different places
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Thanks, glad you liked it! The jagged lines are a little trick I inadvertently stole from ee cummings 🙂
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Talent borrows genius steals
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LOL thanks for that! Well, at least I admit it, having made no secret of my love for ee cummings here on this blog 🙂
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There is a hell of a universe next door, let’s go there instead.
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Yesss, I am IN!!
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See you there
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Maybe parallel universes exist for real. I’d like to experience life in this one.
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I personally believe they exist. This one would be awesome! Thanks so much your great comment! 🙂
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Your words and photos selected for this prompt is truly a scintillating example… Perfection/grandiose creation.
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Thanks Dorna! I did fuss with it a bit, trying to find the right sentiment. Glad you liked it 🙂
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mesmerizing mix of pic and the words….kudos….
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Thank you! Glad you liked it 🙂
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I like the sound of the other universe. This poem has me pondering, thank you for that. ^_^
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Welcome to my world of alternate reality LOL 🙂
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Almost Utopian…I like it!
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Thanks Clarissa! I know utopia does not exist, but it occurs to me there must be SOMETHING out there that is better… easier 🙂
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I like mind bending like this. It sparks the imagination 🙂
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Thanks! Gotta keep the imagination sparkling 🙂
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I have nominated you for the One Lovely Blog award. You can check out the details at: https://witchesofthecraft.com/2016/08/12/one-lovely-blog-award-2/
Blessed Be!
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Aww, thanks Lady A 🙂 I am honored!
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I forgot to leave this:
We have 140 contributions to date, and I am trying again to rope in as many contributors to the Poets for Peace challenge (in place until this the end of August). The many voices in response to this have been fantastic, and I’d love you to add yours (again, if applicable) if you can. Feel free to use an existing piece of writing or a new one asking for peace and/or about the troubled times in which we live.
If you are interested, please leave your poem in the comments section of Neha’s blog and it will be added. https://forgottenmeadows.wordpress.com/2016/07/16/calling-all-poetscreative-minds-to-a-grand-collaboration-poets-for-peace/comment-page-5/#comment-19287
Thank you –
Your voice matters.
We are so grateful to be part of this community where poets and creative minds from around the world stand together uniting for PEACE! This collaboration is open till August 31st and we hope to see more of you join in!
– Neha
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Thanks so much Anita! I had written one after the Bastille Day attacks in France which I’d like to contribute. Posted today on Neha’s site. Thanks for thinking of me.
Peace 🙂
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Cool. Thank you.
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Hey lovely post! This is amazing work
I’d be grateful if you could check my work out as well.
https://yoursuccessinspirer.com/2016/08/17/midnight-intruder/#comment-34774
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Thanks! Yes I will 🙂
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